A lot of the effects I used were brightening the pictures and enhancing certain colors. The colors I enhanced were the pink and orange in the sunsets, it would affect the mood because it was while I was talking about those certain colors of the earth. I also made the picture of a bird flying brighter because that day was very gloomy and I didn't want darkness in my poem. I also used Ken Burns effect on the bird picture and on the picture of the plumeria. I think this effect helps keep the audience awake and not just staring at a picture for five seconds.
I feel like I did an a lot better job on this then I did on my last project. Everything can be better there's no such thing as perfect, I think I could have got added some more video and maybe added a time lapse when I was talking about the sunsetting. I also think that when I took the picture of the bird flying I could have done it on a brighter day when there weren't that many clouds in the sky. Other than these small things I think I did a pretty good job.
good visuals
ReplyDeletea little loud
good kens burns FX!
Compliment: Awesome Lyrics.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Nothing it is perfect.
Compliment: Music is at correct audio and is great and B-roll is amazing.
Really nice, the song matches your poem.
ReplyDeleteThe shots were a little shaky.
I really liked your poem and your shots matched to what you were saying!
Your music choice was really spot on! It helped add to the entire mood of your poem.
ReplyDeleteI think you might have wanted to recite your poem a little slower.
Other than that your poem was great!
Great picture of the nene
ReplyDeletegreat voice over
great job on making liked it is dark
Compliments:Poem was very descriptive
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Some shots were blurry
Compliment:B-roll fit with visuals
Read your poem good. Could have used more special effects. Good photos.
ReplyDeleteGood audio
ReplyDeletenice pictures
nice b-roll
I like the text layovers.
ReplyDeleteYou could make it a bit longer.
The B-roll matched almost everything.
The poem was very creative.
ReplyDeleteThe mic kind of spurts when you speak sometimes
The words you used in your poem were great.
I liked the pictures, they matched the actual words in the poem
ReplyDeleteThe rain looked really fake.....
I liked how you included a brief summary of the words into each picture.
Great shots!!
ReplyDeleteThe shot where you zoomed in the bird was blurry but that is ok
You did an amazing job TESSA!!!!
I like the many details in your poems lyrics.
ReplyDeleteIn the beginning after the first line it was quiet and it was kind of glitchy.
I like the many different shots of b-roll.
I love your poem its awesome. Could have a little more b-roll. But I still like the idea and visuals
ReplyDeleteI loved your use of text! There were quite a few photos; I wouldve loved to see more video! I really loved your music as well!
ReplyDeleteHad good photos
ReplyDeleteIt had had no b-roll
it had good voice over
good music goes with poem. Needs a little more length. Very nice voice
ReplyDeletelove your visual poem
ReplyDeletethe shot where you zoomed in with the bird were blury
great job
Visuals were very pleasing.
ReplyDeleteVoice over does not sound rehearsed.
Kenburns on multiple photos were great.
Your poem is very nice
ReplyDeleteMaybe speak a little slower
Overall i really enjoyed it
great b roll and great audio no bad thing
ReplyDeleteI liked on every visual you put what it is
ReplyDeleteThe tree in the middle was kindv'e glitchy
I liked when you put ken burns effect on the birdflying
I like how you had lots of transitions and how you used the Ken-Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteI think the background music could have been a bit softer.
I love how your audio was nice and clear .
Compliment: I really like your poem and the way you recited it.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you could've evened pout the audio so they weren't up's and down's in the audio.
Compliment: You had really creative and pretty b-roll.
Awesome B-Roll Tessa!
ReplyDeleteIt was perfect nothing was wrong!
The music is cute and the Kens Burn effects fit in Just right!!!
I really liked your poem and how you recited it.
ReplyDeleteI think you could have evened out the audio a bit.
I loved your b-roll and how clear and focused it was.
really good pictures
ReplyDeletecamera movement
Good words in the poem